Tuesday 8 July 2014

I knew this girl..



I knew this girl who loved to dream
Which got buried amidst world's scream...

I knew this girl who loved to laugh..
So called society made her rough...

I knew this girl who cherished each moment..
She dealt a past only to lament...

I knew this girl who enjoyed nature's beauty..
Family burdened her hell lots of duty...

I knew this girl who loved making friends..
She got a future with only dead ends...

I knew this girl who loved to live..
But today when I see.. I can not believe...

I am left puzzled with queries all over..
Is this the same girl is what I wonder!!

Her dreams are murdered.. laughter suppressed..
Moments were taken.. And friends distanced...

Made lonely..to fear..to fight..to breath..
For the real her was lost somewhere beneath..

Still she is alive with a belief
To rise and shine like a twinged leaf..

I know this girl with hope in her heart
To conquer.. HERSELF again.. no matter what.... 



Tapasi Palo




Tapasi Palo

7 comments:

  1. Simple words but deep deep impact. This is what happens when the anchor of a big big ship finally meets the sea bed.
    What I mean is, your ship - Writing, the ship "Which got buried amidst world's scream" finally emerged from the shallow burial and has now got a anchor to halt.
    The first poem I read of your, the first poem which makes me ponder the miseries of being a girl, the first poem on which I comment after being touched through heart, the first poem with which I conclude that, "We never know our strength, until being strong is the only option left."

    Looking for more goood reads. :)

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    1. Thanks Rukshan.. For the appreciation... :)

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  2. Welcome to blogger world dear.......your first attempt is simple yet mesmerizing.
    Keep it up....

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  3. loved the words... the lines are powerful.. and the last stanza gives so much of motivation...

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    1. thanks a lot pratikshya.... :)
      Hope it touched your heart...

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